Wednesday, 20 May 2009

COMMENTS PLEASE

Just finished this game i was black.
Comments most welcome.


Online Chess, Chess.com
lakhote (1506) vs. chessxl (1723), 1
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abcdefgh
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(white to move)
1.e4e5
2.Nf3Nc6
3.Bc4h6
4.O-ONf6
5.a3Bc5
6.b4Bd6
7.Re1a6
8.Nc3O-O
9.Nh4b5
10.Ba2Be7
11.Ng6Re8
12.d3d6
13.h3Be6
14.Bxe6fxe6
15.Bxh6gxh6
16.Qd2Bf8
17.Nxf8Rxf8
18.Qxh6Qe7
19.Re3Qh7
20.Rg3+Kf7
21.Qd2Rg8
22.Ne2Rxg3
23.Nxg3Ke7
24.Re1Rh8
25.Re3Qh6
26.Qc3Kd7
27.Qb2Nh5
28.c3Nxg3
29.Rxg3Ne7
30.Qe2Qc1+
31.Kh2Qf4
32.Kh1Rf8
33.Kg1Qc1+
34.Kh2Qf4
35.Kg1Rg8
36.Rf3Qg5
37.Qf1Qh6
38.Qe2Rf8
39.Re3Ng6
40.Rg3Nf4
41.Qd1Qh7
42.a4Rg8
43.axb5axb5
44.Qf3Rxg3
45.fxg3Ng6
46.h4Nxh4
47.gxh4Qxh4
48.Qe2Qf4
49.Qd1Qe3+
50.Kh1c5
51.bxc5dxc5
52.c4b4
53.Qa4+Ke7
54.Qa7+Kf6
55.Qd7Qd4
56.Qb5Qxd3
57.Qxc5b3
58.Qb4Qc2
59.c5b2
 

7 comments:

From the patzer said...

After a quick scan i suggest you look up the first moves of the italian opening so that 3. ... h6 isn't played anymore but that you develop pieces.

Secondly 16. ... Bf8? Personally i think 16. ... Kh7 is better in that position. Atleast you save the h-pawn.

Thirdly, when a piece up make exchanges but dont forget that you still need material to mate or to help promote a pawn. So maybe after your Qc1+ it's better to take on c3 instead of what looks in my eyes trying to repeat the position with Qc1-f4-c1

chessx said...

chesstiger
Thanks for the comments it's really helpful to have other players look at your games.
3..h6 is a very automatic habit that goes back a long way.
I still think i need to be more attack minded,i tend to look for safe(that proberly means do nothing) moves.
Positions can get out of control before i respond with any sort of correct moves.
I think during a game i revert to type.

Rolling Pawns said...

3. ... h6 is not a very good move, with active play White gets essentially better chances.
6. ... better Be7 than Bd6, you close the way for d7 pawn. You actually realized it later.
9. Nh4? - you could win a pawn by 9. ... Nxe4. 15. Bxh6 not sound sacrifice at all.
Then, except 16. ... Bf8, you defended and counter-attacked well.
I don't think it was right to sacrifice your knight for 2 pawns.
He actually got a better endgame, but you outplayed him there.

chessx said...

Rolling pawns
I think i was some what lucky, as my opponent should have played more aggressivly with the pawns.
If he had pushed them (the kingside ones before i swoped 2 for a knight) i think it would have been a very different game.

linuxguy said...

I think all of your posts should be titled 'I WON BY AN OPPONENT MISTAKE'. hehe.

But seriously, I'll analyze it and get back with you later, plenty of mistakes in this game on both sides, oh yes. ;-)

linuxguy said...

Yeah, chesstiger is right. You had Kh7 to get out of the pin instead of moving your rook, which needs to cover that square. Bf8 is a gaffe, you had Kg7, I believe.

Not sure why you sacked your last piece. He GAVE you a passed pawn instead of pushing his own one.

The Bd6 move, he could have gone Bd5, then BxN on c6 to mess up your pawn chain.

h6 is simply losing a tempo, which he gives right back with moving a3.

Linuxguy said...

Disreguard the Kh7 comment, was getting out of the shower thinking about it and realized again that it fails to NxR, so you played that right, but Kg7 instead of Bf8 still, right(?), looked obvious at a glance.

I may be too tired to do blunderchecks today, not really sure.